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An angel must walk upon our soft earth,
In that girl there, standing by that white rose,
Her hair alone could bring one to write prose,
That scarlet hair must be of heaven's birth.
Is it possible for one so divine
To walk so gracefully on these here streets?
All the other girls, it seems their skin creeps
To see their men stare in awe at this find.
If only, if only I could have her,
I would treat her to the best, the best furs,
the best chocolate, the best jewelry,
Such a dream I have, so merrily,
I would love her always, love bright as day
A dreamer's dream she is, the sweetest fey.
*Warning* This piece is filled with grade A, 100% sap *End Warning*

I think...I think its a sonnet. Its got end of line rhyming...I haven't memorized the different types of poems off the top of m head. It probably isn't a sonnet when I think about it...I got no clue. Its something though. I think it has meter in there....somewhere.
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StormRavenmist Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2011  Student General Artist
it's a perfect sonnet! 14 lines with iambic pentameter (10 beats per line) and the last two lines rhyme. gorgeous poem ^^
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